Talk:Danyang

Please review my article

Hello, my name is Yoon Hee Jung. and I made a articltie 'Danyang'. Please review my article, thank you all!! Hee Jung, Yoon (talk) 05:44, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

Thank you for the detailed information. However, I would like to lower the map magnification by one level so that I can see all the marks. Kang Taeho (talk) 06:08, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

Your article is pretty good! But you have to add lists of several sections. For example, See, Do, Drink... and some others too.. have a good time! JHyunlee (talk) 05:54, 4 November 2024 (UTC)

@Hee Jung, Yoon: thank you for the improvements you have made to this article. Here are some ways you can make it better:

1. the first paragraph of an article should explain why a reader would want to visit a place. What makes it interesting, beyond just that it is a resort town?
2. We know that the places listed are in Danyang-gun, Chungcheongbuk-do, because the article is called "Danyang". In English Wikivoyage, it is incorrect to include the city name in the address tabs of listings, unless the listing is in a different city (i.e., not in Danyang).
3. In South Korea articles, we always use the 24-hour clock (09:00-18:00), not the 12-hour clock (9AM-5PM). See the box at the top of Talk:South Korea.
4. We write prices as "₩1,000", not "1,000 won"

Please make these changes. Thank you. Ground Zero (talk) 20:02, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

@Hee Jung, Yoon: why do you ask other editors to review your article, and then ignore the comments? Please fix your mistakes, or I will remove your changes. Ground Zero (talk) 06:33, 21 October 2024 (UTC)

No, i didn’t ignore other comments. I have other important things to do so I couldn’t take care for a while …!! Please don’t be mad I will do my best to fix my article

Lastly, thanks for comment my article. Hee Jung, Yoon (talk) 06:47, 21 October 2024 (UTC)

@Hee Jung, Yoon Can you fix those issues now? Hanyangprofessor2 (talk) 03:00, 6 November 2024 (UTC)

Can I fix this issues until this Friday? Hee Jung, Yoon (talk) 03:12, 6 November 2024 (UTC)

@Hee Jung, Yoon Yes. Please let me know when you have done so Hanyangprofessor2 (talk) 03:23, 13 November 2024 (UTC)