Talk:Lahaul and Spiti

Copy editing

I did a bit but don't have the time to do more now, so I'll just note that this article needs a careful edit for grammar, syntax, et al. In addition, the word "ideal" is overused, so that its meaning is weakened. It means "the absolute best" and probably shouldn't be used more than once in this article, if at all. Use it if it fits, but not just as a synonym of "good", "great" or "excellent". Ikan Kekek (talk) 12:05, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

I streamlined the language and removed some duplicate information. I also added a few bits from my own experience --Michaelph (talk) 07:56, 3 October 2018 (UTC)