Talk:Laixi

Please review my article

As a school assignment, I am editing a Wikivoyage. Please review the article for me so that I can improve it. Thank you. Redyeoni (talk) 14:20, 5 December 2024 (UTC)

@Redyeoni: thank you for the improvements you have made to this article. Here are some ways you can make it better:

1. The page banner must be in the format 7:1. Please wv:banners.
2. There is no reason to start district articles until there is an overwhelming amount of content in this city article. Add content to the city article for now! If it does start to get overwhelming, we can revisit the question of whether to divide it into district articles.
3. We know that the places listed are in Laixi City, Qingdao City, Shandong Province, because the article is called "Laixi". In English Wikivoyage, it is incorrect to include the city name in addresses in listings, unless the listing is in a different city (i.e., not in Laixi City).
4. In China articles, we always use the 24-hour clock (09:00-18:00), not the 12-hour clock (9AM-5PM). See the box at the top of Talk:China.
5. We write prices as "¥1,000", not "CNY1,000" or "1,000 RMB". See the box at the top of Talk:China.
6. We always include the country code in front of phone numbers, i.e., +86.

Please make these changes. Thank you. Ground Zero (talk) 19:40, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for your feedback, I have made appropriate modifications Redyeoni (talk) 08:24, 13 December 2024 (UTC)

Thank you for making many of the corrections. You will see that you missed many of them. I have made the rest of the corrections. Ground Zero (talk) 13:18, 14 December 2024 (UTC)