Talk:Luanchuan

Please review our article

My partner @왕예화 and I have edited Luanchuan County. If there are any areas that need improvement or refinement, please let us know. I would greatly appreciate it if you could leave valuable suggestionsTMXX0818 (talk) 14:54, 17 December 2023 (UTC)

@왕예화, TMXX0818: Thank you for creating this article. It looks very good. Here are some comments:

• In Wikivoyage articles, the first paragraph should explain why the reader would want to visit Luanchuan. (This is like writing a news article -- the first paragraph should make the reader interested in reading the rest of the article.
• In Wikivoyage, we write prices in China articles like this: "¥45", not "CNY45" other "45 ¥".
• In English, there should always be a space before parentheses. We write: "Shanshui tofu (山水豆腐)", not "Shanshui tofu(山水豆腐)".
• This article is about Luanchuan County, Luoyang City, Henan Province, China. We don't repeat that information in each listing.

I hope that helps you. Ground Zero (talk) 12:32, 19 December 2023 (UTC)

Hello, my team and I have completed the modifications according to your suggestions. Thank you very much for your valuable suggestions, which are very useful to us. 왕예화 (talk) 12:48, 20 December 2023 (UTC)