Talk:Zhangjiajie

Need help with the "do" part of the article

In the Zhangjiajie article, we wrote a large number of travel guides in the section "Do", but we didn't know how to make this text more formatted and organized. We don't know if the current way of writing is good, so we want to ask for help. Lqy328 (talk) 05:54, 14 November 2022 (UTC)

I see that your article adds a lot of geographic information to the "do'", which is a very good idea. Regarding your question you should cut out some of the useless content and add more information about the specific geographical location, it would make the paragraph look more concise. Yjh0830 (talk) 06:09, 25 November 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for your advice. We will take your suggestions into account to improve our articles. We will add additional gps information to make the article more useful and concise. Lqy328 (talk) 06:13, 25 November 2022 (UTC)

Our articles request help

Our editorial page in Zhangjiajie is feeling a bit cluttered, what do I need to do to change it? Caiyayu (talk) 06:02, 14 November 2022 (UTC)

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We are in the process of editing the Zhangjiajie page, please let us know how to change it.Talk:Zhangjiajie – Travel guide at Wikivoyage Caiyayu (talk) 06:08, 14 November 2022 (UTC)

I'd say first delete most or all of the history section; this is not an encyclopedia & most info there is of no importance or interest for a traveller. At most I'd have (without a section header):

Zhangjiajie was named after the Han Dynasty general and minister Zhang Liang (died about 189 BCE). By some accounts he lived in seclusion on this mountain after retirement.

Other sections might be cut for similar reasons. Pashley (talk) 07:35, 15 November 2022 (UTC)

I changed the history section to make it more current. Twsabin (talk) 15:11, 15 November 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for your help in making our article more complete and adding to our experience in editing the wiki. Caiyayu (talk) 06:48, 25 November 2022 (UTC)