Talk:Jieyang

Please review my article

I made some edits in Jieyang, please review，thank you Minazhuang777 (talk) 13:59, 19 December 2024 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but isn't it obvious that the hotel listings are useless? You need to use Wikivoyage:Listings templates, but most importantly, you need to provide addresses and/or Wikivoyage:Geocoding and contact information for every specific listing (hotels, restaurants, etc.). Of course you should not use listing templates for non-specific lists like those of local culinary specialties. Also, be careful with your phrasing. "This could be a more modern hotel in Jieyang" uses a conditional - "could" - which casts doubt on the truth of the statement. You are trying to make a statement that it is a modern hotel, not that it could be. What does that mean, though? Was it built 2 years ago, for example? Be specific. General positive remarks like "offering high-quality accommodation and facilities" risk violating Wikivoyage:Don't tout. Instead, say what makes the accommodation and facilities high-quality. Ikan Kekek (talk) 05:21, 20 December 2024 (UTC)

Hello, thank you for your suggestions. I have modified the hotel and food list. Please check it out. Your suggestions are welcome again. Minazhuang777 (talk) 09:06, 22 December 2024 (UTC)