Talk:Tieling

Encyclopedic text

There is a lot of text in this article that does not belong in a travel guide. I'm fixing some, but much more needs to be done. Pashley (talk) 14:33, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

I would also say a lot of it is just too long, with really user-unfriendly big blocks of black text. Ping User:2022012442RYH. Ikan Kekek (talk) 15:57, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Needs more listings

The introduction has "Chengzishan Mountain City is a national cultural relic protection unit". It is debatable whether this text is worth having; does a visitor care how the site is classified? A listing under See for the mountain city would be far more useful. Visitors will care about how to get there & what can be seen there.

The listing for Longshou Shan is more than half about temples on the mountain, rather than the mountain itself. Should the temples have separate listings?

The Do section mentions a lot of attractions; most should have listings. Again, a visitor is not likely to care how these are classified, & almost certain not to care when or by what government they were tagged, but practical info would be good to add.

The Eat section has some text about local specialities. OK, but it also needs listings for restaurants & perhaps other things like good street food or markets where hikers can provision themselves for a trip.

Currently there are no Drink or Sleep sections. Ideally, both would exist & would be mostly listings. Pashley (talk) 23:01, 18 November 2024 (UTC)