Updates on Israel

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Welcome and thanks for the updates. There were some problems though:

Your recent edits on Israel and Tel Aviv were labelled as "updates", but there was a lot removed too, such as details on the rail network, info on several bus lines (it seems) and advice for hitchhikers. I don't know what parts of the removed information was obsolete, and what parts you just thought were irrelevant. For the latter "update" is not a good edit summary. For non-locals to be able to cooperate, it would be good to explain a bit more when doing such major changes, perhaps separating edits to be able to give different edit summaries. Sometimes it might be useful to mention some lost services ("there is no longer any service to ..."), as people might have heard of them, or remember from last visit.

I note that a lot of links were lost in your edits. If you edit the wikitext, note that external links are in brackets ("[https://whatever linktext]") and internal links in double brackets ("[[target]]" or "[[target|link text]]"). I think the visual editor would preserve links, but it might have done something confusing – or did you edit the text by some external tool?

LPfi (talk) 19:41, 27 October 2022 (UTC)Reply