Talk:Lianyungang

Demographics and factual information

@Piotrus, 악준동: Thank you for your contributions to this article! However, I've removed precise demographic and geographic statistics that don't concern the traveler. Instead of using exact census data, use factual data to draw more general conclusions. Whereas on Wikipedia, exact data is preferred, here, general information is more useful, such as "Lianyungang has a younger than average population," or "Lianyungang is near X." I'd recommend taking a look at star articles such as Borobudur to see what information is most useful from a traveler's perspective.

That said, it's great to see all the new contributions to these articles as this is just a minor point I wanted to clarify. The additions to the article look excellent so far! --Comment by Selfie City (talk) (contributions) 14:52, 3 October 2022 (UTC)

@SelfieCity Thank you for your feedback! Piotrus (talk) 10:57, 5 October 2022 (UTC)

@Piotrus: Consider having a look at our other guide and star articles to see how we put factual information such as population. Borobudur is probably not a good example since it's an archeological site and we don't usually have articles on archeological sites, but the other star articles aren't outliers. SHB2000 (talk | contribs | meta) 11:06, 5 October 2022 (UTC)

we changed Shuanglongjing_Park.jpg to 连云港港-室外-航拍-DJI 0180.jpg because this picture is more representative.This picture was taken with a drone,it can showing a part of the city. 악준동 (talk) 06:21, 17 October 2022 (UTC)

I've cropped the banner image. --Comment by Selfie City (talk) (contributions) 19:25, 19 October 2022 (UTC)

Peer review request

I am starting a discussion here. Thank you for any feedback.악준동 (talk) 06:08, 14 November 2022 (UTC)

Sure thing. What does it mean that Lianyungang is "one of the top ten happy cities in China"? What is "a national innovative city pilot city," and is that relevant to visitors? And how is it "a national demonstration zone for regional cooperation between the east, the middle and the west"? Another thing I notice is that the "Eat" section needs more explanations (what are Guannan liangfen and Guanyundoudan?) and listings of recommended eateries, if possible. Ikan Kekek (talk) 21:33, 14 November 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for your advice. I will improve it악준동 (talk) 06:10, 25 November 2022 (UTC)

Introduction paragraph

@Piotrus, 악준동: The first paragraph should explain why a traveler would want to visit the city. What is the main reason for going there? Ground Zero (talk) 20:43, 14 November 2022 (UTC)

OK I'll add it.악준동 (talk) 06:09, 25 November 2022 (UTC)